Monday, October 23, 2017

“The Most Dangerous Game” Creative Piece

Burmese Tiger Pit (Left): This trap is the “cartoon trap” that kills one of Zaroff’s dogs. Rainsford digs a hole as deep as a few feet underground to ensure that the victim doesn’t escape. He then takes saplings and sharpens the ends with his knife. The saplings are place in the ground and a woven carpet covers the entire pit. This carpet is made with materials from Rainsford’s surroundings so that it blends in with the environment.

Ugandan Knife Spring (Right): In this trap, Rainsford sacrifices his knife in order to kill Ivan and give him a chance to run away. Rainsford finds a nearby sapling and some grapevine. Using the grapevine, Rainsford attaches the knife to the sapling, but not too tightly. When the vine is broken apart or interfered with, the knife is sent flying, powered by the recoil of the bent sapling.


Malay Mancatcher: This is the first trap that Rainsford uses during the hunt. He used a small knife to cut a large, living tree. This makes the tree shorter so that he can place a dead tree trunk atop of it. The branch is then placed somewhere in between the two trunks but at the same time on the floor. This acts as the trigger that makes the dead trunk fall off and hit its victim.

First Quarter Reflections

Where are you in your personal Book Challenge?

I have only read one book for my challenge. I know I should be on my third book by now, but I’ve focused most of my time on reading “It.” The illegal pdf that Clement gave me (thanks Clement) has around a thousand pages and the print is small. For the next quarter, I’ll probably be at around 5 or possibly higher. I’m a few chapters shy of finishing “The Mysterious Benedict Society” and I’m interested in reading “1984” by George Orwell. Once I finish those, I need to look for more books.

What are your goals for ELA in your next three quarters?

My main goal is to get more 4s. Grades matter more in eighth grade because they help determine the high schools you can go to and the classes you can take. With 4s, I can get into better classes where I can learn and feel challenged. My other goal also relates to my future education. I want to be able to use everything I learn in Mrs. Larson’s in every other class. The TIQA format is just the start. I want to incorporate whatever else we learn when we start making more essays into other ELA classes I’ll have in the future.

What strategies have benefited you?

TIQA and a few questions I ask myself help me a lot. I use TIQA for essays here in ELA and projects in social studies. Ms. Raguso might tell us to introduce a quote with “The article says,” put the quote, and then interpret it in your own words. I use TIQA instead. This helps me make better introductions and analyses in that class. I also ask myself some questions when using TIQA. I wonder, is my analysis good enough? Is it detailed and does it take up most of the TIQA. This is what has benefited me a lot from this ELA class.

Tuesday, October 10, 2017

History of The Lottery

Mrs. Delacroix has realized what she’d done. She was one of those who killed her best friend in the whole town. After everyone resumed their daily routines, Mrs. Delacroix stayed and watched as a Mr. Graves took her corpse away. He barely noticed that she was staying. Her eyes already watering, she sobbed and knelt. She killed Tessie. She betrayed her and sided with the rest of the three hundred citizens. 

Why? Why does the town continue to kill every year. Why does nobody recognize the evil and injustice of this yearly event? Why does the lottery exist in the first place? Who could come up with such a horrible idea? Mrs. Delacroix needed answers, and she know only one person old enough to know.

It took a minute to wipe the tears of her face, but it took 7 to walk to Old Man Warner’s place. It was on the outskirts with no neighboring property. From his house, there was a very short road you’d have to walk to reach the actual town. Mrs. Dellacroix crossed this road and reached the front door. She knocked a few times on the old black wooden door

“Mr. Warner? Mr. Warner!”

She heard a grunt, then a few locks open up. Old Man Warner then opened the door to find Mrs. Dellacroix.

“What do you want?” He said in his old man voice.

“I need to talk to you about the lottery”

“If this is about ending the lottery, you’re out of your mind. The whole town depends on the lottery and you and I both know that”

“But I need to know why. Why do we need it? What’s the point? Why does it exist?”

“You want history? Oh, I’ll give ya history. Come in and take a seat.”

Mrs. Dellacroix had never been inside Old Man Warner’s house. As soon as she walked in, she saw a rocking chair and a long mattress across from it. She sat on the surprisingly comfy mattress as Mr. Warner took the rocking chair

“We all know this town and the lottery have been here before us right?”

“Yes, of course Mr. Warner”

“Now, I’m only 77 years old and I know the town’s been here before me. That don’t mean I can’t tell you about this lottery. When I was young, I myself asked someone about the lottery. Same questions you did.”

“And what did they say?”

“Well they didn’t answer the questions, but I figured it all out myself.”

“Go on.”

“See, it all starts around 1843. A little more than a century ago. These townsfolk, a bunch of families, used to participate in the lottery. Thinking it was horrible, they escaped around spring. They picked that time because they’d use the old town’s good food and have time to look for new land or another town. They found uncivilized plains and used crops and seeds from the town they left."

"Few people here and there, along with expanding families, motivated the people to call themselves their own town instead of a group of explorers. Oh, this is 1844 by the way."

"Another, what, ten years later, more people leave towns with the lottery. Let’s say we have around 134 people."

"Here’s where things go bad. It’s 1861 and the harvests have been really bad. Of the years between the population increase and ‘61, only one year had good harvest. The rest were basically rubbish."

"Now here’s something to remember. The year someone fell down that well in the town was when we had good harvest. Around 1863, someone didn’t want to risk the painful death of starvation. This lady thought it through and she decided to cut her arm off with a knife, leaving herself to bleed out. There were many good crops that year as well. And here’s something else. Both deaths were in June 27th."

"For the next three years, a group of friends did the same. One would kill himself in 1866, another in 1867, and the last in 1868. All suicides were in June and the town had a wonderful time with the crops"

"Now we’re at 1871. The original settlers thought of bringing back the very thing they ran away from. The lottery. They realized why it existed and they implemented it in the town. From them on, we’ve always had good crops.”

“Wow. So you were right about the ‘lottery in June, corn be heavy soon’ saying”

“Exactly. Not everyone understands. They’ve become blind fools. Honestly, even I know it’s wrong, but the sacrifice benefits everyone else and it’ll drain down the population over the future.”

The answers nearly haunted Mrs. Delacroix. It was now 1949. She knew someone would have to be sacrificed for the well-being or the rest of the town. During the new lottery, the history of the town was stuck in her mind. She couldn’t stop thinking about it for a year.

Mr. Dellacroix selected a paper. He couldn’t help but look at it beforehand. It had the dot. He told his wife.

“What should we do?”

“I couldn’t live without you or our son” Mrs. Dellacroix responded. “I’ll sacrifice myself.”

“What? No. The victim is random. You can’t just go up there and ask them to stone you” he said in a serious and low tone.

“I know things that this town has forgotten. I’ll show them all.”

When Mr. Dellacroix revealed his paper, it was his family’s turn to pick who would die. Before Mr. Summers even reached them, Mrs. Dellacroix yelled out “I sacrifice myself”

The whole crowd was stunned to see someone use her life to save those of her family. 

“Are you sure about that?” Mr. Summers asked

“Let me explain. The whole point of the lottery is to sacrifice someone in exchange for a good harvest. It doesn’t matter if it’s random. I’m willing to let everyone stone me for their good health and the health of my family”


The town was skeptical about Tessie’s response, but those were the last words of Mrs. Delacroix.

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Monday, October 2, 2017

"The Lady or The Tiger" Continued

     Of course, the princess, being semi-barbaric, had constantly thought of having the youth open the door with the hungry tiger. He could simply wait for her in the afterlife where they could spend the rest of eternity together. Then again, it would be an awful lot of time before the princess joined him.
     Why not keep him alive? Because that would mean he’d delightedly marry another girl. If the princess wouldn't have him, why should anyone else? She thought about her recurring nightmares. If she killed her lover, she’d have to face the bloody sight of the youth being devoured, along with the guilt of being responsible for his death. If she kept him alive, she’d suffer the parades and celebrations of the youth’s survival and marriage.
     If the princess was to be with the youth, then she may as well keep him alive. She’d thought of a plan to keep him alive and away from the other girl. Permanently.
     After countless times of ensuring herself that everything would turn out ok, she told the youth to open the door on his right. He opened it and was immediately shocked and almost couldn't believe he’d be marrying another girl. The parades took an emotional toll on the princess and they annoyed her to the point where she’d shut up anyone talking about it, even the King.
     That night, the princess barely slept at all thinking about her lover and his wife. Although she could barely stand the thought, she knew everything would be as it should by the morning after tomorrow’s.
     The youth was the only thing the princess thought about the next day. Everything was gloomy and emotionless. People were still talking about yesterday’s events. This only motivated the princess to drive her towards the somewhat horrible part of her plan.
     She waited until everyone was sleeping. The King, other residents, visitors, and especially the chefs. With the cloak of night, she got casually dressed to go outdoors and snuck into the kitchen. She grabbed a certain object and hid it in a cut open pocket.
     It seemed that everyone was sleeping. There were no vendors or anybody on the streets. She traveled to the youth’s house and adjusted her eyes to the dark. Knowing where everything was, she carefully went to the master bedroom.
     She saw both the youth and the other woman. The object hidden in her pocket turned out to be a knife, one which was rarely used for it’s purpose. Equipped with the knife, the princess raised her right hand which was shaking abnormally and quickly struck the knife. She struck the woman’s stomach.
     The pain was so immense, she awoke from her sleep and let out a scream loud enough to wake up the youth and keep the princess from her drowsiness. Both realized the princess had stabbed her.
     To finish the job, she raised the knife back up and stabbed her in the heart. She had killed the other woman. This was the princess’s punishment for marrying her lover. The princess was glad, but the lover was in shock.
     “I don't know if you notice but I loved her” exclaimed the prince.
     “You thought I wouldn't do anything? I told you what door to open so we could be together”
     “For that I am grateful, but I was going to leave you for her because I realized I never really loved you!’
     “Oh, I see how it is. In that case, I’ll do you the favor of spend the rest of eternity with her.”
     And with that, the princess stabbed the youth in the neck and heart.

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